GREAT SOUND
Hey there... you've got a great sound here. I love your choice of synths. What's more is your piece actually moves and builds... that's true talent right there dude. The only thing I'd point out that needs improvement upon would be your kicks... all through your song they were hard to hear. The music kept moving cuz everything was so well written... it's just help the bounce-y feel of the song along if the kicks were more audible. Try adding a compressor on them- that always helps me.
Would you mind giving me your opinion on one of my works? I'd appreciate it if you did.
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AS